Sunday, October 24, 2010

Morning on the Aguirre (sea)

Morning on the Aguirre (sea)
(The Haikus style poem, with Ramage Style Inners)



Wilder, colder waves crashing
with mad, angry winds
on the Aguirre…!

Dangerous dark-headed skis
have passed
now the Aguirre is passive!

Now that there is calm—
everyone’s in the lounge
having coffee, pastry

White tipped mountains
raise above our ship
aboard the Via Australis…

The Captain came by greeted me
diverging to the bridge
a feel…

of the ocean—
to tighten the ankles of the ship
where few dare sail…



Note 1: This is kind of a new style poem (a Haiku, style form, with Rob Bly’s Ramage style inners, meaning using the: er, in air, ar, to provoke the poem to a higher edge):

Note 2: The Aguirre Sea (or Mad Sea) is a term used by sailors, for the most part, that is between Cape Horn, and the Murray Narrow, there is a stretch of sea (waterway) and early in the morning of the 18 of October, 2010 (7:00 a.m.), the ship was rocking pretty bad, the sea was angry, mad, and the following day, we had left Cape Horn, and the Drake Passage on our way to Wulaia, thus, in-between we were, on the Aguirre… (Considered part of the sea, or passage, in Patagonia) No: 2855 (written in part on the 18th of October, and 23 of October, 2010)

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